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Shuttle - revised by ~Arryma:iconArryma:



I saw you sighing under the sequin night,
singing a dream to sleep the stars.
Could we reach a breath beyond this veil of velvet sky that keeps the Earthlings blind?
Tonight, behind the moon’s eye, let us stand tip-toe and catch hold of comet tails.
We will sail up up up through the thinning atmosphere
and swirl in slow orbit.
These local stars and satellites are just old wishes,
and our spinning arm of the Milky Way is not such a wild ride.
Leave those island-hoppers to their tropics and sardine-can beaches.
Let’s go planet hopping instead,
and bounce on till glacial Pluto
where that view of spanning infinity must be to die for.

We will go onward, ever onward.

And all is fair in love and starships,
so build me your best.

Drop letters under every door,
signed with love from the sci-fi junkies,
like last laments of fledgling children leaving home.
Tell them not to worry.
We are going out there—
There, the great vague vacuity
of shattered static space-time,
where every dream I’ve ever owned has found me.
We are going home.
I see a spaceman,
And I think he says hello.
Welcome home. Welcome home.
So spin me a haphazard hope;
Tell me this is something more than interstellar fanfare.
It would be best to take up residence in a nebula,
nestled down deep inside those folds of astral clouds,
with the pulsing matter of infant stars to keep warm by.
And all around us tick and tock the inner workings of the universe
as it gives life to itself.

We will go onward, ever onward.

And all is fair in love and starships,
so build me your best.
©2006-2010 ~Arryma
:iconarryma:

Author's Comments

Remember Shuttle? [link] ...Probably not. But hey! I've always been fond of this poem but there was a nagging feeling in the back of my headf that it never quite hit what I was aiming for when I wrote it. There was some unneeded angst, and some confusion in the imagery, and I don't know. So I decided to rehash it a little. It's basically the same, but I think it's improved.

I'm curious which version you like better. (my teacher liked the old one, arr).

Also, DA's poetry categories are teh suck.

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:iconxanthenex:
I like the beginning of this one better, I think. Although I do like this from the last one:
"For these local stars and satellites are spectacular only as yesterday’s wishes,
and thrilling as last Autumn’s leaves clogging the gutter
to eyes that have already watched them for a lifetime."

I don't know. Just something about it. Bravo! :)
:iconarryma:
Did I get rid of that part? I actually don't remember why XD

Thanks!

--
Once you can accept the universe as being something expanding into an infinite nothing which is something, wearing stripes with plaid is easy.

[ - Albert Einstein ]


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